B of B&B
Old, New, Gold
Towned today,
with Ber, Mar, Flea & Jin
was there for an importatnt task, & Puey
called halfway, to complain about some jamn vending machine.
Walked, skipped along our way,
and ate and crapped and gossiped!
Such parallel, nostalgia, reminded me of halcyon days;
with Yan, Cui, Poh and Bean; hand in hand on the streets.
From Far East to Cineleisure,
with company, no, don’t mind the distance.
From Gelare, to Flower’s in the Attic’s up & coming closure
braving crowds and contributing to Singapore’s economy; we’re patriotic citizens.
Friends of New, Old, they all come and go
along the streets of Town; Yet amongst it all, amongst it all, i'm glad i found my Gold.
Haha, my first try of an Elizabethian sonnet. Note: i tried my v.v.v.v. best to use alternate rhyme, and not make it sound spastic, and tried to insert a voltar and use running lines and keep a form and rythym(ok this part quite badly done) & yeah... haha, you get what i mean.
:)
seeyuh!
Old, New, Gold
Towned today,
with Ber, Mar, Flea & Jin
was there for an importatnt task, & Puey
called halfway, to complain about some jamn vending machine.
Walked, skipped along our way,
and ate and crapped and gossiped!
Such parallel, nostalgia, reminded me of halcyon days;
with Yan, Cui, Poh and Bean; hand in hand on the streets.
From Far East to Cineleisure,
with company, no, don’t mind the distance.
From Gelare, to Flower’s in the Attic’s up & coming closure
braving crowds and contributing to Singapore’s economy; we’re patriotic citizens.
Friends of New, Old, they all come and go
along the streets of Town; Yet amongst it all, amongst it all, i'm glad i found my Gold.
Haha, my first try of an Elizabethian sonnet. Note: i tried my v.v.v.v. best to use alternate rhyme, and not make it sound spastic, and tried to insert a voltar and use running lines and keep a form and rythym(ok this part quite badly done) & yeah... haha, you get what i mean.
:)
seeyuh!

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